Wednesday, 3 July 2013

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: MEMORY

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A Memory


The things we did 
The things we would see
They really meant so much to me


Days gone by
As if a dream
Water flowing in a stream


The time we had
We made it last
Never dwelling in the past

The clock wound down
there was no chime
We just came to the allotted time

Your face each day I see
As if your still here with me
Alas its just a memory

11 comments:

  1. Lovely and very touching memory written with undeniable emotion...

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  2. Sweet memories last for all eternity, beautiful entry!

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  3. I really like this this, wonderful memories

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  4. Wonderful post, Baz, wonderful memories of your father :-))

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  5. One of the best memories to be treasured. Wonderful written tribute to your dad.

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  6. A truly beautiful tribute/memory, Baz!

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  7. The memory of Love. Beautiful taken on the theme.

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  8. It seems you and I don't need a reminder from the greeting card industry to think of our Dad's once a year. Nice write.

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  9. It's good to have such memories of your Dad.

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